Hey guys!
This week I started writing a story and i'm really proud of it. I have only wrote one chapter and I have not finished it yet but I really wanted to blog it. I wrote this when we did free writing because we basically did free writing all week. I am this now because I am waiting for my camp iMovie to finish downloading so I decided to post this while I am writing. If you have any feedback please comment! P.S sorry I haven't posted in a while!
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Chapter 1: No time for shoes
“BANG” I woke up with my heart pounding, it sounded like the front door had fallen in. A humming noise traveled through the hallway, followed by loud footsteps banging on the wooden floor. “Thud...thud...thud...” Then silence scattered around. I sat up quickly and looked to my left to see my sister Willow huddled in the corner of her bed shaking with fear. I rapidly got out of my bed and rushed to Willow. But something caught my eye, a letter assigned to me and my sister laying on the floor. I picked it up and I started reading it out loud. “This is your parents, do not muck around! You NEED to escape! Follow the path in the forest at the back of the house and a train is waiting for you. We have been meaning to tell you something our whole lives, we are a part of-” “thud...thud...thud” “we have to go!” I cried. I picked Willow out of her bed and opened the window, the footsteps were getting closer and closer. “Where are you!” a deep scary voice echoed through the walls, “I know you're there!!!” they whispered. I dropped the letter. “Here jump out the window!” I said “what about our shoes!” “There's no time for shoes” I cried once we had both climbed out the window. Me and my sister raced into the forest, disappearing in the trees.
hi like how u added chapters cant waut to see what gonna see happen next
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