Girl falling down a tunnel

 Hey everyone!

For the past week we were doing descriptive writing on a girl falling down a tunnel. First we wrote a plan and then we wrote the 5 feelings, smell, see, feel, feel (emotions) , taste and hear (I think I got all of them) Here is my story it's not perfect so if you have any things that could I fix tell me!

Heres my writing

I was going for my daily walk around the block when I saw something in the corner of my eye. I looked to my left and saw a mysterious sparkle in the trees. My curiosity got the better of me and I found myself walking towards it. Before I could reach it the ground below me crumbled open and I fell into it. Suddenly I was falling down a tunnel.

 I saw the beam of light from my world fading away. The cold, stale air pushed against my body. My arms reached out trying to get a grip on something, anything! But the dirt and rocks gathered in my hands and slowly disintegrated soon after. The panic got to me, where was I falling too? What is at the bottom? The deeper I fell the more I got used to my surroundings.Seeing nothing but the light from above fading away. Then I heard voices, multiple voices and before I could listen in BANG! I smashed into the ground. 

Dust filled my mouth and a terrible smell pushed past me. The light above me had completely faded away and I was staring into nothing. I felt numb and still. I finally got the courage to get up. I got up but then I tripped on a piece of wood and suddenly I was falling again. This time I was falling past miles and miles of bookshelves reappearing then disappearing, again and again. I felt like I had been falling for decades. My life was flashing before my eyes.

 

Camp-Reading create tasks

                                                              Hey everyone!

There was no WALT on the Ruru.

Yesterday was the first day of term 4 (for me it was) and for reading our create task/ story's were what Ruru were doing next week! Next week Ruru is going on camp for 3 days so our 3 story's we had to read and our 3 create tasks were based around nature/camp. Before we started on our create tasks we had to read 3 story's they were the danger man, this story is when they were at camp and they decided to go to the lake but one boy got stuck and the had to save him. The second story was School camp fun, this story is about when they got to camp and what the did. The last story was a play and was a bush walk. It was called bush walk too! For Create task 1 we were put into groups for maps and stuff. For Create task 2 we had to make a name tag for our bunks for camp. For Create task 3 we had to learn about things about New Zealand and make a Pickto chart with 10 or more facts on it. This week was really fun and I loved the create tasks

Create task 1: For this one it was fun on paper and it was a map with numbers in each squares. We had to fill in the squares with the drawings we had to do (they were on the side) sorry if my explaining is confusing.

Create task 2: If you had a read through the big text at the top you would have saw that next week Ruru is going to camp and for our cabins and our bunks we got to make tags for our bunks. Mine was on a piece of paper shaped really cool and my bestfriend Shakima drew a eye in the corner and I had light blue blending into the dark blue.  

Create task 3: I'm doing it right now!