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Thursday, September 2, 2021

Writing-the walking beast

 Hey everyone!

This week for writing we were doing pobble365, pobble365 is a website that has lot's and lot's of photos to use for writing. It's a really good way to think of ideas for storys if you can't think of any. I wasn't sure if you had to write a long story or a short poem story so I just did it short. I actually wrote this on Wednesday but I didn't blog it because I was helping doing stuff at home. I got confused because it said to keep working on your lockdown poetry anthology poem but it also said to use pobble 365.  Comment what you think about my writing. 


The walking beast

By Amelia


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People gasped with fright. Their faces dropped dead on sight. Kids squeezed their toys tight. Oh boy, what a site. Do not fear! As the brave knight appeared over the light.
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1 comment:

  1. AdeleSeptember 3, 2021 at 2:39 PM

    Hi Amelia,
    I really enjoyed your poem, it's cool! I think you've created a vivid picture with your descriptive words and punctuation and you've captured a moment in time.
    I'm enjoying reading your blogs :)
    Thanks for sharing!

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