Hey everyone!
Today for SLJ we had do do something called Fishing False Teeth! We had to watch a video without any words then we had to read an article and fill in a comic that was on a slide we copied but before that we had to do (i am not done yet)
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Kia Ora Amelia,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Your blog post is great! I like the level of concern you can see in the first image and caption which is complemented by the second picture where the man does in fact look like he might be choking. You’ve thought hard about what sounds someone in this position might make and added those in which are super beneficial to your comic strip too. I’m relieved to see in the end he’s alright! What do you think will happen next for the two men?
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
I noticed in some places, the text is a bit small. Perhaps you could increase the size of these bits or place them in bold so it’s easier for your readers to see.
Happy blogging and keep up the good work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)