HI Amelia, You have created a visually pleasing slideshow with some very interesting information about the ozone layer - well done! You have also identified what the ozone layer is and why it is important to have. The language you used was very technical - it would be great to add in some explanations as to what some of those words or concepts mean, eg. stratosphere, ozone-depleting reactions, chemically active, etc. This would also show that you understand the concept as well. Keep up the great work - tu meke!
Hi Amelia, I really liked the way you layed out everything. Maybe next time you could explain what the words mean. Why is there a hole in the ozone ? From Ella
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HI Amelia,
ReplyDeleteYou have created a visually pleasing slideshow with some very interesting information about the ozone layer - well done! You have also identified what the ozone layer is and why it is important to have. The language you used was very technical - it would be great to add in some explanations as to what some of those words or concepts mean, eg. stratosphere, ozone-depleting reactions, chemically active, etc. This would also show that you understand the concept as well.
Keep up the great work - tu meke!
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you layed out everything.
Maybe next time you could explain what the words mean.
Why is there a hole in the ozone ?
From Ella